dude i did read dis poem coz m crazy abt da topic ba m afraid didnt get dat much as its a bit difficult urdu…lolxxx i hope u dn mind dat….ba believe me da topic is just outrageous…and no doubt…iqbal is just un4getable….tc n u’ve agr8 time…
Ali bhai salaam!
This is really appreciable….I want u to allow me to read this poem in next GO US GO raily of Jamaat-e-Islami…if u u hav no objection then ill giv it to my father…. he belongs to JI…..please reply!
@ Shareh,sure bro… i have no objection at all msg is important than any individual’s fame and i appreciate your moral status that you aksed for the permission.
And tell me when this raily is, would write something in accordance with the exact subject inshaAllah.
wasallam.
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The best poem I would say.
Nice …..
Great!!!
its v nice.. n actually happening in todays world!
we all need to act upon dis…
The best thing in classical work is that it’s contemporary all the time!!! I wish & pray that we assimilate these noble thoughts!
really gud work !!!!
بوہت اچھی تشبیہات کا استمعال کیا ہی …
yeah…its the ‘Dependence’ on others which is eating us from inside.
nice poem.
Thnak you all for your comments and encoragement
awsome
Bestest ..!!
Keep GoinG ..
dude i did read dis poem coz m crazy abt da topic ba m afraid didnt get dat much as its a bit difficult urdu…lolxxx i hope u dn mind dat….ba believe me da topic is just outrageous…and no doubt…iqbal is just un4getable….tc n u’ve agr8 time…
Ali bhai salaam!
This is really appreciable….I want u to allow me to read this poem in next GO US GO raily of Jamaat-e-Islami…if u u hav no objection then ill giv it to my father…. he belongs to JI…..please reply!
first, thank you all again
@ Shareh,sure bro… i have no objection at all
msg is important than any individual’s fame and i appreciate your moral status that you aksed for the permission. 
And tell me when this raily is, would write something in accordance with the exact subject inshaAllah.
wasallam.
zabardast!